Title: Equilibrim
Fandom: ST: Deep Space Nine
Author: karrenia
Character: Jadzia Dax and Benjamin Sisko
Rating: General Audiences
Set shortly after "Invasive Procedures"

word count: 724

Type of beta: grammar, general commentary, flow, etc.
Turnaround time: no deadline, I'm flexible.
Reply to the post, or email me: karrenia_rune@yahoo.com

Thanks in advance and take care, Karrenia

Title: Live Wire
Fandom: Static Shock (cartoon)
Author: karrenia (Karen)
Characters: Virgil Hawkins (Static Shock) and Richie (Gear)
Rating: PG
Recipient: lirael
Request Details: http://community.livejournal.com/fic_on_demand/918485.html

Disclaimer: Static Shock belongs to the WB, DCU comics, and its producers and creators; it is not mine. It's my first time writing in this fandom, while I've seen the episodes of the show, so I hope it fills the bill of what you had in mind when you made the request. .

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Type of beta: grammar and general contunity, and general comments would be lovely. It is not necessary to be familar with the fandom, but it always helps. I don't know if I've gone over the 750 word limit, but thank you in advance and take care, Karrenia

Title: None yet (any suggestions welcome)
Fandom: Yami no Matsuei
Word count: about 350
Warnings: None
Critique wanted: anything, pretty much--general structure, flow, canon-compliance, IC-ness. Is the first-person voice for Hisoka believable--and would he, in fact, be likely to say any of this?

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My beta is on her honeymoon at the moment, so I need a bit of help. The problems are mainly going to be punctuation, maybe a few misspelled words. Thanks for your help.

Title: The End (maybe)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Word Count: 638
Warnings: None

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Title: There's Not A Morning
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Wordcount: 577
Characters: Riku, Malificent, extensive mention of Sora.
Warnings: Spoilers for KH1, zomg. :o Written with a mild attempt towards Riku*Sora subtext, but if you can play the game without seeing the stuff, you can probably read this without seeing it, too. Nothing NSFW or otherwise objectional, though.
Critique: IC-ness, style/clarity (some of the sentance structure confused my brother?),

Notes: Set sometime during KH1, after Riku joins Malificent, but definitely before Neverland. Otherwise, place it where it pleases you in the timeline.
Inspired by the song "With Every Breath I Take" from the musical City of Angels (no relation to the movie), of which the duet reprise fits Sora and Riku really well in spirit, if not in word. (Well, IMO it does.)
Uploaded music-ness, just for you guys: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=7LE3LYGN (m4a/iTunes format)

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Hi, newbie here. *waves* Let me know if I do anything wrong. :)

Untitled (any suggestions?)
Word count: 547
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis, John/Michael
Warnings: Hard R or NC17, male/male, sorta interspecies
Looking for: Anything, but especially anything that seems unclear, anything that seems cliched, anything that seems extraneous. And if you know the fandom, anything that seems OOC.

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Thank you so much!

Title: Lust
Fandom: Inuyasha
Word count:  138
Warnings: Death, and mentions of sex.
Critique type: Grammar, and style.
Other: I have a question should I leave the tense as is or should I change it to past?

I never thought I'd write something based directly on a rant in fanficrants. ^^;;

Title: none yet
Fandom: Harry Potter
Length: ~ 200 words
Warnings: teenagers making out, crushing embarrassment
Critique wanted: General grammar, structure, etc., and some specific questions:

1. Am I using the spells properly?
2. Are the point deductions reasonable, or am I way off base for these kinds of infractions?
3. The students' names -- out of place, or plausible for wizards?
4. Would a wizard say 'hormones'? If not, suggestions?

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Oh dear god this is silly.

Title: Deleted!
Fandom: Doctor Who
Length: 100 words (boo yah!)
Warnings: References to Season Two episodes 'Rise of the Cybermen' and 'Age of Steel'. And... is 'cracked-out crossover' a warning?
Critique wanted: does anyone actually get the joke? Is it embarrassingly cheesy? Do Brits still use the spelling 'tyre'? Help. ^^;;

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Title: Road Trip
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Characters: Cloud, Demyx, Zexion, Saix, Vexen
Word Count: 139
Rating: Worksafe
Summary: A little roadtrip crack with the Order and Cloud.

Critique: Any spelling, grammar or homophones.

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